Poor Imp

Moved to Fantasy Fiction Hey Dark Magik. If you want comments or reviews, so to speak, of your work, you'll want them in the Litary Forums. The Writing Corner is ...

An even-tempered young woman, tall and narrow with short hair and fear of waterfalls. --- Yann Koerner

Hey Chinadoll, Flighty? Oy, I know I have more than five things, and dozen buried in drawers or in the back of the computer's memory. #_#'' If I finish one, ...

Hullo Sean. I spaced it out for you, so that it'll be easier for others to read and critique. I'll try to get to it myself, one way or another. ...

Ha. Complimented? Er, on being quiet - maybe. Hey, it could be a compliment, right? Compliment here and it means the bloody drifter wants something or, er, the girl's drunk. ...

A weighty read, in one way, Brad - as often - and for its brevity, it's laced to suffocation with ideas and with death. I'd say Hell, but as yet, ...

Addo seems an invariably Italian name - and as a character, I think a light-hearted young fellow. But in light of the week-long name it's short for, perhaps he's rather ...

I have almost no impression at all... Something looking forward to an event, likely mainstream fiction? With no impression, it would be a toss-up as to whether I looked more ...

Ach, Brad hit the editing aspects I was emphasising. Ah well. I'll go over some of them despite it, and then skip on to other things. [Characters, it seems] Firstly, ...

Sean -- Thanks very much for the glance-over. Always pleasant just to know someone's reading. As to some of the sentences, I see the point about fragments. But the other[s]? ...

Granted...now you haven't the slightest idea of what you want. I wish I could think straight...I seem to be thinking in waved lines. #_#

...I haven't the slightest idea. It might be an awful, young adult piece - or it could be a fantasy short with odd ideas. I would look at if it ...

It sounds like nothing I would tend to read, but it's tone is dry enough it amuses me. I'd glance at the summary just for that. ^_^ -- Theatre-Boy

A younger sister, with large eyes and a bit of a pout who is always tagging along when anyone else is doing something. -- Franz

Middle-Eastern, or fantasy with that tilt to the tone. Only because I like the sound of it, I'd pick it up. Though I don't tend to go for name-titled stories ...